my awesome narrative writing

In week 6 in writing we got set the task of writing a narrative on are PBL witch was what will the future ask of us. now onto the story my story was called The attack of the climate change the Characters were George & Steve

Setting In the city of everloshion (problem is climate change and that the sun is blowing up)
The attack of the climate change
It’s late at night in my modden house on 13 sky street, all of a sudden I get woken up by Large robot Cop car megger phones. (Evacuate your home’s this is not a drill head to center square for your own safety)
They said this motoball times. So I get in my car and make my way to center square when I get to the center square on top of the presidents building their is the biggest spaceship island thing that I have ever seen in the world” that I'm guessing can hold all of new zealand when i got their i could see there was a giant platforms conted to our home and then we got lifted into the giant spacecraft thing then I start to hear a siren. 5, 4 ,3 ,2 ,1 at this point in time I thought we were about to take off into the sky but there was a massive dome that went over us. A few hours later a sirin goss of then we here 10 ,9 ,8 ,7 ,6 ,5 ,4 ,3 ,2 ,1 and we have lift of knowing full well that they should have done a test flit before the full flite but they did not but thankfully it worked and we all wanted to know how we were going to live but i notest that my house was floating underneath the thing we were on so i go to the head of all of this and ask him. Hi steve how do I get to my house that is floating underneath this thing we are on. For you um you need to stand on the number 3849787 to enter you home. Ok thank you steve that’s all for now.
Ok see you later then be back at for dinner at 7:30
Ok thank you
You welcome goodbye
Goodbye
So I headed off to my number 3849787 where is my number i cant find it so i go back and ask were it is but just before I got back. Bang there was a gigantic nose so I started running as fast as I can but before I know it, I start to feel funny and then all of a sudden this big robot suit that comes and picks me up (a few hours later I wake up) um were am I
You are in the new and a proven space hospital cool but what happened um we have been hit with a strike of lightning.
Gosh, how are we going to fix it.
Um we are just rounding everyone up and bring them here to see if they are ok and then we need to send the robot suits up with a pane on reinforced titanium foresed glass.
Ok then.
But there is one problem
What
Um no one knows how to put the glass in.
Um your right thats a big problem also here's the thing i know how to put glass in i just don't know how to work the sute that I need
Um we can teched you
Ok then thank you
So for the last 5 week we have been teaching George hare to work the robot and we have sent him up and we have fixed the crack. To be continued.