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Friday, November 29, 2019

READING CREATE TASK 2

This week for Reading our create task was to read a poem and write a comment on what it makes a visualise. Here is the poem that we had to read and here is my comment.

The winter evening settles down.

Comment: what this line makes me visualise is that it has just been snowing and that it has just came to a stop so that we could come out and play. Senses. The sense that this part of the poem makes me think of is touch and sight.Touch because you might be touching the snow wance the show storm has parsed. And sight because you might be inside looking out the window at the snow waiting for the storm to pass so that you can go outside and play

With smell of steaks in passageways.

Comment: what this line makes me visualise is that some of your friends have come round and that you are having a barbecue and that they are cooking steak of the barbecue for dinner and that it smells so good that it feels like it's taking you to some place else and it feels good. Senses. The senses that this part of the poem makes me thing of is smell and sight. The reason I picked smell because in the poem it says that the person can smell the steak on the barbecue.

Six o'clock.

The burnt-out ends of smoky days.
Comment: what this line makes me visualise is that their is a fire and that it's getting very bad and the firefighters have had to come and put it out and after they have put it out and have left. And a few days later it is still there and I could see all the wood on the house was burnt to the ground.
And now a gusty shower wraps.

The grimy scraps.

Of withered leaves about your feet.

And newspapers from vacant lots.

The showers beat.

On broken blinds and chimney-pots.

And at the corner of the street.

A lonely cab-horse steams and stamps.

And then the lighting of the lamps.

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